Kia Ora, Monika i wouldn't stop laughing about how you where telling me about your how you saw your sister in the kitchen with a pigeon. My Favorite part that i liked about your poem was that you where telling me how you and your friend where cleaning your room. From yours kindly Tatiana
Malo e lelei Monika, your peom is really good also I think you should've added some more writing but it was still good. My favourite part was the "I heard a sound from the kitchen And saw my sister with a pigeon." part because it really goes together. Good job, Keep it up
What an wonderful Poem you have there, I wonder how your sister got a pigeon in that 6th line? Well I really liked how you have done your poem in this blog post. I wish to see more Poems from you. Keep up the great work, and Kai te Pai! :)
Kia ora Monika, love the poem, I can imagine myself looking at my sister holding a pigeon, i would be so scared and frightened because I hate pigeons there so yuck.I really loved how you used the word kitchen to rhyme with pigeon, it works really well. Keep up the good work!!
Thanks for giving me credit Monika but next time don't put my last name in it..... Need anymore help then come to me.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora, Monika i wouldn't stop laughing about how you where telling me about your how you saw your sister in the kitchen with a pigeon. My Favorite part that i liked about your poem was that you where telling me how you and your friend where cleaning your room. From yours kindly Tatiana
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Monika, your peom is really good also I think you should've added some more writing but it was still good. My favourite part was the "I heard a sound from the kitchen And saw my sister with a pigeon." part because it really goes together. Good job, Keep it up
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ReplyDeleteWhat an wonderful Poem you have there, I wonder how your sister got a pigeon in that 6th line? Well I really liked how you have done your poem in this blog post. I wish to see more Poems from you. Keep up the great work, and Kai te Pai! :)
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Kia ora Monika, love the poem, I can imagine myself looking at my sister holding a pigeon, i would be so scared and frightened because I hate pigeons there so yuck.I really loved how you used the word kitchen to rhyme with pigeon, it works really well. Keep up the good work!!
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ReplyDeleteI love how you say about pigeon
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Bel lavoro Monika - Good work Monika