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Monday 20 May 2019

Peter Pan and the last Living tree

WALT -  Use a set sentence structure to create an interesting Narrative 

Once upon a time, there lived a magical boy named Peter pan living upon a mysterious magical portal where nobody but peter pan knew what to do or say to make the portal open. Then one moment an evil witch who had a mole on the tip of her nose came and took peter pan's magic powers away but there was only one thing he could do, was to get it back before sunrise, If not then his enchanting powers would be gone and the stinking witch would vanish into the spirit world and never return until the next eclipse. 

It was 10 hours until sunrise and peter pan didn't have that much time to get his magical powers. Peter pan had only one friend to rely on, was the last living tree. Peter pan called him Lant. so, Lant, the last living tree had a magic of his own but cannot give it to anyone else, so Peter and Lant made a brilliant plan but didn't know for sure If it was going to work so they tried multiple times but still didn't feel like it was going to work so they made a plan A and a plan B. The both of them set off the critical place, a place people have experienced but have never come out of there. Peter and Lant packed all of their trunks they needed and set off to Skeleton Island, where Zombies and all kinds of deadly things guarding the evil witch ( their queen ). They have finally arrived at skeleton Island and could see some people in the distance. 


YAY!! it's my old friends Lant this is Posie, Jaya, Betty, Metro, Zoe, Mobley, Jayla, Marzuli, and Claire. " Hello everybody nice to meet you," Lant said. Come on everybody we don't have much time to get my magic powers back. " Next stop we go to Skeleton Island," said Peter Pan. They have finally arrived at Skeleton island. The only person that is scared is Jayla, she's so afraid that she is at the end of the boat shaking her legs then Marzuli asks Jayla " Why'd you come if you're afraid? "  
" Because I would have had no one to play with ? " whined Jayla. They all crept at the back of a huge rock seeking to see how much Goblins are guarding the hideous looking castle. " Marzuli, Jayla crept on them and kill the heck out of those wicked things," said Peter. The brother and sister crept up and killed those wicked goblins. There was a time how an old man had the same problem as Peter Pan. But the man’s problem was not as bad as Peter pans, his problem was worse than anyone who has had the same problem combined. They all split up and went their separate ways The others followed Lant because he was the only living nature that had powers. Peter, Jayla, and Marzuli all made it up to the long-lasting stairs. 



until they saw two goblins guarding the queen, the evil witch having a plastic looking crown with dinosaur stickers on it thinking she's a queen but really she isn't. The evil witch holding a sharp plastic stick in her hand waving it in Peter's face saying " you stay back you ." " ohh like this or like this. " replies Peter. " just stand there " " right here, right here " " just stand still and don't move!!! " Shouts the witch. Peter sees a light on the corner of his eye grabs it and tries to run away but nope, you know how fast witches are???  yeah well, that evil old witch rode on her broom as fast as her 100 hundred yr old broom could go, grabbed the necklace laughed away and out the window. But the witch did not know that Peter drank his magical powers and he ran as fast as his little legs could go. It was finally sunrise and Peter Pan had got his magical powers back. Peter saw the witch in the sky vanish into thin air and that meant she wouldn't disappear forever she would come back in the next Eclipse..

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